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The smell of you on my satin sheets will not leave.
It's as if you are stained into them.
Your scent stuck to the pillows that when I lay down
To sleep it makes dreams of you effortless.
The jacket you gave me reeks of your manly sweat
And Grizzly Mint dip.
Your cheap Axe cologne embedded into the collar
And sleeve cuffs that it intoxicates me.
A temporary high.
The memory of you and us together is etched into my mind.
No matter how hard I try they will not dissipate.
Why can't you leave me?
You haunt my being like a lost soul walking graveyards at midnight.
The memory of hot wild nights in summertime, pure wedded bliss
Without being married.
You were my prince charming and I got lost inside the
Fairytale you subjected me into.
It's as if you are stained into them.
Your scent stuck to the pillows that when I lay down
To sleep it makes dreams of you effortless.
The jacket you gave me reeks of your manly sweat
And Grizzly Mint dip.
Your cheap Axe cologne embedded into the collar
And sleeve cuffs that it intoxicates me.
A temporary high.
The memory of you and us together is etched into my mind.
No matter how hard I try they will not dissipate.
Why can't you leave me?
You haunt my being like a lost soul walking graveyards at midnight.
The memory of hot wild nights in summertime, pure wedded bliss
Without being married.
You were my prince charming and I got lost inside the
Fairytale you subjected me into.
poem about the breakup. i'm so broken... the pieces so small and scattered all over the place I can't find them all and I can't put my heart back together again... it hurts. really bad.
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Beautiful poem and so true of life I think too, the smell of someone lingers like the memories...in time it will heal Dear but well the is always a shard of what has been.. there within the wound
love isn't so much of the happiness but how you weather the storms together and sadly life can drive wedges deep in love and rip people apart..with those storm...we have great way of blaming those we love most for the pain we are feeling and in that we destroy the beauty of unity..sometimes well a lot of time without even knowing
Anyway Dear whatever the reason I so hope that happiness will find you heart again soon
Time does heal wounds just never quite as fully as we can hope at times and we must pass through the stages of pain to emerge on the other side
better to understand our next love in life..Sometimes what was lost can be found again even,
but that depends on the reasons as to why it was lost
Just keep your chin up Dear Marissa
Writing is a good way of working through things but careful not to dwell in the moments of pain for too long as its easy to be come trapped there and that is never a good thing..
love isn't so much of the happiness but how you weather the storms together and sadly life can drive wedges deep in love and rip people apart..with those storm...we have great way of blaming those we love most for the pain we are feeling and in that we destroy the beauty of unity..sometimes well a lot of time without even knowing
Anyway Dear whatever the reason I so hope that happiness will find you heart again soon
Time does heal wounds just never quite as fully as we can hope at times and we must pass through the stages of pain to emerge on the other side
better to understand our next love in life..Sometimes what was lost can be found again even,
but that depends on the reasons as to why it was lost
Just keep your chin up Dear Marissa
Writing is a good way of working through things but careful not to dwell in the moments of pain for too long as its easy to be come trapped there and that is never a good thing..