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Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard my body cracked
My heart shattered within
Shutting myself down
Closing up to others
My silence forever kept
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My horrors now revealed
You're gone forever
And I'm standing here alone
Lost and foresaken
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My visions now hazed
Coldness seeping in
Freezing my internal organs
Lost in time and space
Frozen expressions of sadness
No longer do I exist
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard I died in an instant
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard my body cracked
My heart shattered within
Shutting myself down
Closing up to others
My silence forever kept
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My horrors now revealed
You're gone forever
And I'm standing here alone
Lost and foresaken
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My visions now hazed
Coldness seeping in
Freezing my internal organs
Lost in time and space
Frozen expressions of sadness
No longer do I exist
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard I died in an instant
Literature
Affection
If I could spread
affection far
across the world
with the blow of
a dandelion,
I would.
I would so love
to watch the white
puffs float to meet
their destination.
I want to see more eyes,
lighting up like fireflies;
finding their way home.
Literature
brimming
I have a great
capacity for love
and an equal
capacity for pain
and you
test the limits
of both
Literature
Forbidden love
It was the math of you and me
Two different species that defy biology
We shared the dream of breaking theory
And sealed the doors and we denied to see.
Was me, was you, was never known
The ironic vaudeville when it begun to grow
I still remember when we're lying in the snow
With eyes wide open and glazing to the afterglow.
Who cares you're made of ice and I'm designed to burn?
That you're immortal and I'm dying from the second I was born?
Your blood is blue and mine is red and I'm alive and you are dead
They say you left and I remember while I struggle in my bed
Our days have past but there are things I still don't understand.
A memory of
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I have posted my suggestion before. But I'm here to remind you to use a subject or more to be inside your poem. As I know, a subjectlless poem is quite boring and not interesting to read. I'm not judging you that your poems are bad, but I just want to make them better. I hope you can understand that I'm not a professional yet in poetry, but at least I know how to write a poem worth reading for. You may want to take a look for my poems and then you'll understand what I mean.
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